Ok guys, i'm in a bit of a jam...

ECLIPSE is a new story that i'm writing and i'm having a tough time getting some much needed inspiration, and the family ain't really giving me good feedback, so i need some help.

The story is about this young Jackel by the name of Alexander Maverick living on a world across the galaxy, and he is a member of an elite fighting force called ENFORCER. He basically meets up with very hot human chick called Vicky, and they fight to try and sustain the peace, and basically go around metting new friends and begin kicking the crud out of baddies who steal and manage to blow up buildings using some really badass gadgets.

....And that's it, I want to come up with a fun and intense story line, but i can't really get one going. If any of you got any ideas for new intising characters i could make somthing out of it. Humor is somthing i'm a bit noobish at and i've been trying to write humorous dialogue for my characters. I'm kinda into Drama/SciFi, and i would love some tips and some helpful feedback that could maybe strengthen the much needed comedy in my story.

Thanks guys, and if you want a character drawn for your own stories, i'll be happy to throw you a sketch your way, just e-mail me or throw me a PM!

~AH